Wait, that posted here? That was supposed to comment on a remix somebody made. OnlineSequencer is broken. :/ Anyways, here's the link to the original FTM: http://famitracker.com/forum/posts.php?id=947
Thanks for making your own version! Unfortunately, the guitar instrument you chose isn't able to play some of the higher notes, which I assume is why you took it down an octave. If you think this sounds better than my version, that's great! It's probably partially due to vanity that I prefer my version, though. By the way, did you check out the original FTM? There was a link in the comments, but those comments seem to have disappeared for some reason. :/ Anyways, sorry for the lengthy comment!
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