hey! i like it! the cellos are too choppy, you need to find a better way to get the sound you're looking for there. i like the rest of the progression. I think you might do better with secret piano for sustains as the piece goes on
This sequence was originally supposed to be a remix or revision of a unfinished sequence I had already made a long while ago. But it didn't exactly go as planned. The names are similar but what was supposed to be a remix, didn't exactly come out that way so it doesn't sound the same in the least bit. This is the "original version":