I don't listen to much trap style music, but I think that you should maybe continue with what you have and add more of an obvious lead melody next. The 808 bass at the end of 10 and beginning of 11 kind of overlap and distort each other so I would replace the F with a D and use a detune marker to pitch it up to that F.
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