Actually I'm not going to because even if I showed you that wouldn't help you progress.
12/25/22 12:22
I can remix this and show you what I'd do instead.
12/25/22 12:21
The drums are too loud, the melody is too awkward overall and doesn't fit the soundfont of the drums because it has reverb. If you are going for 8-bit you should try mess with the distort effects and equalizer effects on just about every instrument to find what sounds good, also the effect options.