I removed some of the floatiness on m122-130 by clearing out the piano and adding a build up with clearer drums. I also cleared out some of the floatiness and distortion on m242+. also m308+ was intentional floatiness since the ending was supposed to fade.
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(I wrote a whole essay but I accidently deleted my comment so I wrote this one shorter)
feel free to comment to point out any errors I missed.
Damn, nice work. This is great
If you're looking for feedback, I'd tighten up the down beats in the section before measure 130. It sounds a little bit too floaty. The section from 130-194 avoids this with a stronger drum beat. So I'd add some sort of sharper beat sound to the part before 130. I can see you're going for a floaty/ethereal sound there, so definitely keep any added beats subtle, but a small sharp sound on the downbeats would go a long way imo. Same goes for the section after 242.
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