Don't worry, I'll explain it to you here, but it's going to be a bit complicated because I won't be able to give you an example of what I'm talking about. I'll talk to you soon. I have some school work to do. When I can, I'll talk to you.
I'll be honest, you're very creative, but I think you need to learn some musical concepts, I think you quickly lose your idea, and your music ends up being a bit strange, because it seems like you're trying several things, and it ends up being a confusing song
I listened to it now, and I think it really surpasses mine, I can see the inspiration from Mozart because of the tremolos and arpeggios, but taking a look at other songs of yours I can see a unique style in your music, even with the inspiration from Mozart, I really liked your songs!
Hello! I actually quite like it! In my opinion, It's sounds quite like Mozart's style. I learnt to compose better by listening to some of the greats. Beethoven, Mozart, Chopin, Liszt etc. I took some inspiration from them and it really helped me improve. I hope this helps you too.
To be honest, one thing I do a lot is recreate pieces by other composers to try to understand their style. Some of the composers you mentioned, including you, have a very good ear. At the time I made this music, I was enchanted by Mozart's piano sonatas.