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Simple introduction here:
I am Crimson, and I joined OS a few months ago,
I know that I am far less competent than most people who started this kind of threads,
but I hope to receive some feedback and comment on my compositions.
So I'll post my original compositions here, but not covers or adaptions because I do not own the music.

Some single posts in this thread will be removed, but don't worry, they'll just be moved together in one post.

Note: Personal fave/Popular choice/Specials(applies to all posts)

Original compositions list:

(1st - 50th, from oldest to newest)

1. Nameless nightshttps://onlinesequencer.net/427878
Rehash: https://onlinesequencer.net/519402 (100 plays)
                          https://onlinesequencer.net/569596 (200 plays)

2. If I : https://onlinesequencer.net/427969

3. Zone Ahttps://onlinesequencer.net/428007 ( a very short level theme thing )

4. Happy endinghttps://onlinesequencer.net/428615
rehash: https://onlinesequencer.net/702587

5. Decendhttps://onlinesequencer.net/428628
Rehash: https://onlinesequencer.net/533841

6. Sempiternal Darknesshttps://onlinesequencer.net/438695

7. Remorse: https://onlinesequencer.net/433024

8. Resenthttps://onlinesequencer.net/433554

9. A Broken Delusionhttps://onlinesequencer.net/436393

10. Nepenthehttps://onlinesequencer.net/438150

11. Saudadehttps://onlinesequencer.net/439072

12. The Forfeit Mindhttps://onlinesequencer.net/439701

13. The Forest of the Abandonedhttps://onlinesequencer.net/445098

14. Suffocatehttps://onlinesequencer.net/446565 ( warning: loud )

15. Farewell Letter: https://onlinesequencer.net/446595

16. Miss Youhttps://onlinesequencer.net/454085

17. Solitudehttps://onlinesequencer.net/454101

18. Dancinghttps://onlinesequencer.net/455949

19. Embracehttps://onlinesequencer.net/459125

20. Crawlin' : https://onlinesequencer.net/459185

21. Hand in Handhttps://onlinesequencer.net/460974

22. Promisehttps://onlinesequencer.net/472775

23. A short piecehttps://onlinesequencer.net/467533

24. First piece I've ever written (remix)https://onlinesequencer.net/467690 (written before I came to OS)
Rehash: https://onlinesequencer.net/529656

25. Always with youhttps://onlinesequencer.net/469286 (also before I join OS)

26. Untitled in progress (finished)https://onlinesequencer.net/470370
Rehash: https://onlinesequencer.net/538814

27. Nightfallhttps://onlinesequencer.net/470419

28. Climbing Hills: https://onlinesequencer.net/470905 (MIDI image)

29. YOLOhttps://onlinesequencer.net/472831

30. Apocalypse:  https://onlinesequencer.net/474342

31. Wanderinghttps://onlinesequencer.net/483755

32. Endeavorhttps://onlinesequencer.net/485691 (for school project)

33. Friskhttps://onlinesequencer.net/485694 (for school project)

34. Reflectionhttps://onlinesequencer.net/487970 (for school project)
https://onlinesequencer.net/618882 (fix)

35. Mourninghttps://onlinesequencer.net/487253

36. Elationhttps://onlinesequencer.net/491790

37. The First Sign of Springhttps://onlinesequencer.net/492099

38. Give This Song a Namehttps://onlinesequencer.net/493658

39. In Our Memorieshttps://onlinesequencer.net/494301

40. Chasing pasthttps://onlinesequencer.net/497539

41. Rosy: https://onlinesequencer.net/502982
music box version: https://onlinesequencer.net/936214

42. Questhttps://onlinesequencer.net/505866

43. [8-bit] Lost: https://onlinesequencer.net/505869 (the end is a simulation of a game freeze)

44. Lamenthttps://onlinesequencer.net/505890

45. using every instrument: https://onlinesequencer.net/505952
[26/12/2017 ver] https://onlinesequencer.net/698653
[world update ver] https://onlinesequencer.net/848350

46. Back in Time: https://onlinesequencer.net/507643

47. [8-bit] Sweet Dreamshttps://onlinesequencer.net/508195

48. Deep: https://onlinesequencer.net/508988

49. Accompanyhttps://onlinesequencer.net/512327

50. 50th original sequence - Journey :  https://onlinesequencer.net/511389

Feel free to comment, whether it's about your preferences or what you think that I can improve on.
[Casual's Tier] Compose Every Day Challenge (starting chord):

- Day 1 - Betrayal (Am) : https://onlinesequencer.net/521253

- Day 2 - Little Wishes (F)https://onlinesequencer.net/522021

- Day 2 - Parting (Cm) : https://onlinesequencer.net/522132

- Day 2 - Break Free (A#) : https://onlinesequencer.net/522326

- Day 3 -  Longing (Em) : https://onlinesequencer.net/523638

- Day 3 - Through Fire and Ice (A#m) : http://onlinesequencer.net/523665

- Day 3 - Lost Child (C#m) : https://onlinesequencer.net/523734

- Day 4 - Endure (F#m) : https://onlinesequencer.net/524704

- Day 5 - Incident (E) : https://onlinesequencer.net/525290

- Day 6 - Free (B) : https://onlinesequencer.net/526354

- Day 7 - Thank You (G) : https://onlinesequencer.net/527086

- Day 8 - Fearless (Dm) : https://onlinesequencer.net/527920

- Day 8 - Change (G#m) : https://onlinesequencer.net/527965
                                      rehash: https://onlinesequencer.net/556931

- Day 9 - No Regrets (D#m) : http://onlinesequencer.net/528815

- Day 10 - Distrust (Fm) : https://onlinesequencer.net/529637

- Day 11 - Pursue (A) : https://onlinesequencer.net/530498

- Day 12 - Hope (D#) : https://onlinesequencer.net/531158

- Day 13 - Return (C#) : https://onlinesequencer.net/531994

- Day 14 - Flashback (F#) : https://onlinesequencer.net/533085

- Day 15 - Venture (Gm) : https://onlinesequencer.net/534839

- Day 16 - Game Over (Bm) : https://onlinesequencer.net/534840

- Day 17 - Forward (G#) : https://onlinesequencer.net/536156

- Day 17 - Unwind (D) : https://onlinesequencer.net/536182

- Day 17 - Memory ( C ) : https://onlinesequencer.net/536196
                  autoclave's version with added instruments: https://onlinesequencer.net/536914
I'm starting to like your recent songs due to good use of Grand Piano with reverb. Somewhat similar to my style of composition.

Although at this point, I'd recommend if you used more octaves on the left hand melody to add more 'bass' and transitions to calm parts more smoother. I like your melodies a lot, keep it up! Smile
(07-04-2017, 11:46 AM)VoidZee Wrote: [ -> ]I'm starting to like your recent songs due to good use of Grand Piano with reverb. Somewhat similar to my style of composition.

Although at this point, I'd recommend if you used more octaves on the left hand melody to add more 'bass' and transitions to calm parts more smoother. I like your melodies a lot, keep it up! Smile

Thanks for the reply(and advice)! Actually I only discovered reverb after I saw your compositions  Blush
I was wondering how you did the effect so I asked.

People on OS are so helpful  Smile

#StillSortOfaNewbie
(51st-100th)

51. Flip sidehttps://onlinesequencer.net/513418

52. Realizationhttps://onlinesequencer.net/513431

53. Pasthttps://onlinesequencer.net/514328

54. [8-bit] Delusionhttps://onlinesequencer.net/514366 (possibly the weirdest thing ever heard)
      Extension 1: https://onlinesequencer.net/530508

55. [8-bit] Loathing: https://onlinesequencer.net/515428

56. Fiery: https://onlinesequencer.net/515468 (dubstep like piece)
https://onlinesequencer.net/569537(a more realistic dubstep remix)

*start of reverbs in piano pieces*

57. Under the starshttps://onlinesequencer.net/516678 

58. Towards youhttps://onlinesequencer.net/517655

59. Goodbye https://onlinesequencer.net/529700

60. Wish you well (in progress): https://onlinesequencer.net/530177 (follow-ups will be posted later)
                                      (Ver. 2):  https://onlinesequencer.net/531738
                                      (Ver. 3):  https://onlinesequencer.net/536927
                                        (Ver. 4):    https://onlinesequencer.net/545835 
                                 Completed:  https://onlinesequencer.net/547899

61. Destiny:   https://onlinesequencer.net/533685 (MIDI Image)

62. Waiting:  https://onlinesequencer.net/537759

63. Broken:  https://onlinesequencer.net/537887

64. Dignity:  https://onlinesequencer.net/544640

65. Wish:  https://onlinesequencer.net/547135

66. The Silent Dance https://onlinesequencer.net/547151
      major version: https://onlinesequencer.net/547153

67. Dispute: https://onlinesequencer.net/547153

68. Finally: https://onlinesequencer.net/548976

69. Grief: https://onlinesequencer.net/550947

70. Vow: https://onlinesequencer.net/550973

71. Yesterday: https://onlinesequencer.net/551296

72. Antipathy: https://onlinesequencer.net/551920

73.  https://onlinesequencer.net/552729

74. Epiphyllum:  https://onlinesequencer.net/554607

75. Devise: https://onlinesequencer.net/556093

76. Nostagia: https://onlinesequencer.net/556914

77. False Awakening: https://onlinesequencer.net/557810
True Awakening: https://onlinesequencer.net/689877

78. Dance of the Abandonedhttps://onlinesequencer.net/558291

79. Denial: https://onlinesequencer.net/559625

80. Valor: https://onlinesequencer.net/560295

81. Tide: https://onlinesequencer.net/562568

82. Oblivion :  https://onlinesequencer.net/563173 (refining an old piece before joining OS)

83. Remember: https://onlinesequencer.net/563998 (flute test w/ 8-bit Sine)

84. Surmount: https://onlinesequencer.net/565340

85. Colorshttps://onlinesequencer.net/565833

86. Fate: https://onlinesequencer.net/566705

87. Sunset: https://onlinesequencer.net/567714

88. Moving On: https://onlinesequencer.net/572374

89. Counter attack: https://onlinesequencer.net/572704

90. Revenge: https://onlinesequencer.net/573294

91. Adding as many half notes as I can: https://onlinesequencer.net/573201 (scrap)

92. For You: https://onlinesequencer.net/573581

93. Turning Back: https://onlinesequencer.net/576894

94. Starlight (in progress V): https://onlinesequencer.net/575334

95. Jungle Fairytale: https://onlinesequencer.net/576851

96. When you're in a hurry (beg for a cab): https://onlinesequencer.net/577361 (scrap)

97. Skies: https://onlinesequencer.net/577456

98. Reminiscence:  https://onlinesequencer.net/578207

99. Envy: https://onlinesequencer.net/578314

100. Dramaphiliac: https://onlinesequencer.net/579342
(101st - 150th)

101. Story of Mine : https://onlinesequencer.net/580611

102. Snow: https://onlinesequencer.net/583437

103. Everything: https://onlinesequencer.net/586603

104. [10-min challenge] Corrupt : https://onlinesequencer.net/586649

105. Before Dawn : https://onlinesequencer.net/588566


107. Love you : https://onlinesequencer.net/590764 (refined old piece)

108. Rain : https://onlinesequencer.net/592120 (refined old piece)



111. Pioneer (19/9 YT stream) : https://onlinesequencer.net/600200

112. Castle of the Moon (21/9 YT stream) : https://onlinesequencer.net/601921

113. Pondering : https://onlinesequencer.net/606561

114. Crimson : https://onlinesequencer.net/604642

115. Courage : https://onlinesequencer.net/605232

116. Statics: https://onlinesequencer.net/611378 (four-and-a-half-minute-long 8-bit song)

117. Suspense: https://onlinesequencer.net/611363 (short loop)

118. Regret: https://onlinesequencer.net/612169

119. Scarlet: https://onlinesequencer.net/613201

120. Loving you, falling for you: https://onlinesequencer.net/614396 (notes created by typing the title)

121. Truth: https://onlinesequencer.net/614590 (refined old piece)

122. The Returning of S*en: https://onlinesequencer.net/615687

123. Moving On: https://onlinesequencer.net/572374

124. Forget: https://onlinesequencer.net/622681

125. Soar: https://onlinesequencer.net/625705

126. for LP05: https://onlinesequencer.net/632136

127. War Cry: https://onlinesequencer.net/630971

128. Empty (trying to compose deaf): https://onlinesequencer.net/636818

129. Please love me: https://onlinesequencer.net/640203

130. Jealousy: https://onlinesequencer.net/636057

131. End of story (I'm the monster): https://onlinesequencer.net/640744

132. Too Late: https://onlinesequencer.net/641307

133. Wonderland : https://onlinesequencer.net/654159

134. Tonight : https://onlinesequencer.net/658300

135. Lullaby : http://onlinesequencer.net/664142

136. Blessing : https://onlinesequencer.net/666256

137. Persist : https://onlinesequencer.net/669135 (duration : 5 minutes)

138. Dearest [Crim's theme] : https://onlinesequencer.net/667785

139. Another Day : https://onlinesequencer.net/670670 (3-min challenge follow-up)

140. Delight : https://onlinesequencer.net/671833

141. Beyond the Tears Fallen : https://onlinesequencer.net/671845

142. https://onlinesequencer.net/671879

143. Torment: https://onlinesequencer.net/673769

144. Rewind : https://onlinesequencer.net/679130

145. Forgive : https://onlinesequencer.net/682753

146. Cureless: https://onlinesequencer.net/684212

147. Reaching Out : https://onlinesequencer.net/687361

148. Repetition: https://onlinesequencer.net/691901

149. Alone: https://onlinesequencer.net/691858

150. Let Go: https://onlinesequencer.net/695655
[More Than Just A Cup of Tea Tier] Compose Every Day Challenge (starting chord):

- Day 1 - Merry (F7) : https://onlinesequencer.net/672801

- Day 2 - Blooming (D#7) : https://onlinesequencer.net/673261

- Day 3 - Gliding (A#7) : https://onlinesequencer.net/675644

- Day 4 - Hush. (C#7) : https://onlinesequencer.net/675661

- Day 5 - Dawn (Am7) : https://onlinesequencer.net/676572

- Day 6 - Fade (A#m7) : https://onlinesequencer.net/678107
Okay Crimson, please don't look so low on yourself. you are currently my fav songwriter apart from Alan Walker and MinecraftUniverse (a.k.a TrueMU a.k.a Jaz). AND I JUST LOVE YOUR SONGZ SO MUCH
And by the way, I saw that one of your songs is called "Alone"... But there are so many popular songs called Alone that you maybe should try some more umm... original song names...
I mean like Alan Walker has an "Alone", Marshmello has an "Alone" so yea...
AND PLEASE UPLOAD ON YOUR YOUTUBE CHANNEL xD
(Sorry for "scolding" you I really am not the right person to do it)
good. welcome to team cimson
[151st-200th]

151. Isolation: https://onlinesequencer.net/696449

152. Time (refined old piece) : https://onlinesequencer.net/690750

153. Field of a lost dream : https://onlinesequencer.net/701218

154. Undo : https://onlinesequencer.net/702233

155. Skipping : https://onlinesequencer.net/705231

156. Different Paths: https://onlinesequencer.net/707349

157. Ringtone??? : https://onlinesequencer.net/708037

158. The fallen Stars : https://onlinesequencer.net/711618


159. Carousel : https://onlinesequencer.net/718621

160. Leap : https://onlinesequencer.net/721637

161. By your side : https://onlinesequencer.net/724109
rehash: https://onlinesequencer.net/857194

162. Breaking Point : https://onlinesequencer.net/724228

163. Pages : https://onlinesequencer.net/724264

164. Agony : https://onlinesequencer.net/738301
remix [credit to alex32124] : https://onlinesequencer.net/848331

165. Shatter : https://onlinesequencer.net/740217

166. Carry On [192 notes challenge] : https://onlinesequencer.net/741935
reprise: https://onlinesequencer.net/872869

167. Blind Dance : https://onlinesequencer.net/742309

168. Cruelty [final ver] : https://onlinesequencer.net/751136

169. Purpose : https://onlinesequencer.net/760290

170. Nothingness : https://onlinesequencer.net/763586

171. Encounter : https://onlinesequencer.net/767025

172. It's Great to Be Alive : https://onlinesequencer.net/784072

173. Mourning : https://onlinesequencer.net/792990

174. Perfect World : https://onlinesequencer.net/794460

175. Saviour: https://onlinesequencer.net/794833

176. Unforgivable: https://onlinesequencer.net/797575

177. Even So... : https://onlinesequencer.net/799508

178. Pluviophile : https://onlinesequencer.net/811255

179. Edge : https://onlinesequencer.net/815065

180. Vengeance : https://onlinesequencer.net/823176

181. Story : https://onlinesequencer.net/824043
Tthe story ends here: https://onlinesequencer.net/872873

182. Guilty : https://onlinesequencer.net/828724

183. Plateau : https://onlinesequencer.net/837035

184. Uncertainty : https://onlinesequencer.net/846104

185. Get Over It : https://onlinesequencer.net/848371

186. Inconsistent : https://onlinesequencer.net/791833

187. Closed Doors : https://onlinesequencer.net/735221

188. Haunting : https://onlinesequencer.net/768047

189. Today, Tomorrow : https://onlinesequencer.net/858684

190. Don't close your eyes : https://onlinesequencer.net/861052

191. Why are you Crying? : https://onlinesequencer.net/872933
        alt ver: https://onlinesequencer.net/873787

192. [one octave challenge] Chant : https://onlinesequencer.net/886217

193. Myotosis : https://onlinesequencer.net/889627

194. It's late : https://onlinesequencer.net/891354

195. Aurora : https://onlinesequencer.net/894273[/url]

196. Look through me : [url=https://onlinesequencer.net/907781]https://onlinesequencer.net/907781


197. Sole Wanderer : https://onlinesequencer.net/907710

198. Tragedy (Lost is Lost): https://onlinesequencer.net/932487
First draft (Lost is Lost) : https://onlinesequencer.net/909284
First draft (Tragedy) : https://onlinesequencer.net/909648

199. Cursed Fate : https://onlinesequencer.net/908426

200. Just Like Yesterday : https://onlinesequencer.net/914168
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