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RE: 2020 September Monthly Contest - Lopyt - 09-12-2020 (09-12-2020, 05:24 PM)emekat Wrote: Maybe it's too cliche but it makes me feel sad. Reminds me of them 80s rock songs haha, nice RE: 2020 September Monthly Contest - Lopyt - 09-12-2020 May I suggest not using the standard drumkit, it sounds really bad RE: 2020 September Monthly Contest - Pegach - 09-12-2020 RE: 2020 September Monthly Contest - Ross Ewich - 09-13-2020 (09-12-2020, 05:24 PM)emekat Wrote: Maybe it's too cliche but it makes me feel sad.I did a quick edit to change "Drum Kit" to "Electric Drum Kit" RE: 2020 September Monthly Contest - Syntax - 09-14-2020 this can be a sad song if you think about it RE: 2020 September Monthly Contest - SilentWindOfDoom - 09-14-2020 RE: 2020 September Monthly Contest - izzy - 09-15-2020 Entry 1: I wrote this while having a nervous breakdown, here are the lyrics: my life is fine i am content more than i've ever been and i'm thankful for all that i have so why do i feel so *****ty? why do i feel so tired? i just want to sleep until tomorrow i should be crying tears of joy instead, half of me is screaming and the other half is numb and i miss you and i and i don't know how I'll live without you here my woe is over whelming, i can't live on my own, i can't love myself as much as you do, no, i know that it's stupid, i live in constant fear for you and i don't want you to leave, everything will pass me by while i sit here paranoid oh i love everything and it's destroying me no, how will i live when it all disappoints me the world is crashing and burning one day we will all fall and i will have to watch it die you are my everything please don't leave me, i am weak i just want to go to sleep Entry #2: Lyrics: Why don't you love me? Why is it so hard? Why can't you love me? You left me scarred I gave you my heart You gave it back broken And you don't even regret your decision Why don't you want me? You pushed me away You didn't even want me to stay for two days You gave him your soul And left me with nothing And now I have nothing You took it away you took it away I just need a mother who cares about me Who gives up her ugly abusive eye candy I gave him respect I gave you my blessing But now you just hate me He's better than me, right? I'm no better than a fool for trusting you Who trusts their mother, right? Of all the rules in life Some say trust family Some say trust nobody What do I choose? Who do I choose? You betrayed me Gave me away Left me to the wolves it's child's play Taking candy from a baby Taking bliss from a girl Feeding on me like a vulture What do you want from me? What do you want from me? Give you my money? When all you do is leave me bloody and heartbroken because you care more about him than me RE: 2020 September Monthly Contest - Alan Tiger - 09-16-2020 RE: 2020 September Monthly Contest - Firebolt391d - 09-17-2020 Okay. I think I'm satisfied with this one. It's not even going to be close to being a winner, but at least it achieved the effect I was hoping for. RE: 2020 September Monthly Contest - Jey - 09-19-2020 i tried :> STORY TIME: aight in this piece, Oli is singing. He's trying to apologize to his friend (currently turning into a zappy-floof-birb), who he really hurt. He's explaining how he's "gone insane; pushed everyone away" and he realizes that his coping method (creating androids) is not healthy and is slowly killing him. Oli realizes that you can't replace people with machines, and that you need to keep your friends close to you to truly feel happy. #HugsForOliver :'D and y'know what screw it- #HugsForCharles ('cause y'know like- he's kind of metamorphosing into a birb rn...) also please don't ship them, they're friends, that's all :D might add onto the sequence [shrug] |