05-08-2021, 06:38 PM
(This post was last modified: 05-08-2021, 06:40 PM by Firebolt391d.)
I agree with The Institute about your bass/guitar (muted guitar) notes. There may be some deviations in what he suggested that would work, but definitely I am hearing C as being the main/root note in the piano part at the beginning.
I'm not sure what kind of key you are trying to follow, but those electric guitar notes (starting in measure 13) also don't seem right to me - they seem a bit harmonically dissonant, for lack of any better terms.
Well, anyhow. Idk.
The percussion is good :]
I'm not sure what kind of key you are trying to follow, but those electric guitar notes (starting in measure 13) also don't seem right to me - they seem a bit harmonically dissonant, for lack of any better terms.
Well, anyhow. Idk.
The percussion is good :]