Crimson's Originals
#1
Music 

Simple introduction here:
I am Crimson, and I joined OS a few months ago,
I know that I am far less competent than most people who started this kind of threads,
but I hope to receive some feedback and comment on my compositions.
So I'll post my original compositions here, but not covers or adaptions because I do not own the music.

Some single posts in this thread will be removed, but don't worry, they'll just be moved together in one post.

Note: Personal fave/Popular choice/Specials(applies to all posts)

Original compositions list:

(1st - 50th, from oldest to newest)

1. Nameless nights
Rehash: [url=][/url] (100 plays)
                          (200 plays)

2. If I : 

3. Zone A ( a very short level theme thing )

4. Happy ending
rehash: 

5. Descend
Rehash: 

6. Sempiternal Darkness

7. Remorse: 

8. Resent

9. A Broken Delusion

10. Nepenthe

11. Saudade

12. The Forfeit Mind

13. The Forest of the Abandoned

14. Suffocate ( warning: loud )

15. Farewell Letter: 

16. Miss You

17. Solitude

18. Dancing

19. Embrace

20. Crawlin' :

21. Hand in Hand

22. Promise

23. A short piece

24. First piece I've ever written (remix) (written before I came to OS)
Rehash: 

25. Always with you (also before I join OS)

26. Untitled in progress (finished)
Rehash:

27. Nightfall

28. Climbing Hills:  (MIDI image)

29. YOLO

30. Apocalypse:  

31. Wandering

32. Endeavor (for school project)

33. Frisk (for school project)

34. Reflection:  (for school project)
(fix)

35. Mourning

36. Elation

37. The First Sign of Spring

38. Give This Song a Name

39. In Our Memories

40. Chasing past

41. Rosy: [url=][/url]
music box version: 

42. Quest: [url=][/url]

43. [8-bit] Lost: [url=][/url] (the end is a simulation of a game freeze)

44. Lament: [url=][/url]

45. using every instrument: [url=][/url]
[26/12/2017 ver] 
[world update ver] 

46. Back in Time: [url=][/url]

47. [8-bit] Sweet Dreams[url=][/url]

48. Deep: [url=][/url]

49. Accompany[url=][/url]

50. 50th original sequence - Journey : 

Feel free to comment, whether it's about your preferences or what you think that I can improve on.

Without the blinding melancholy may no majestic colorful worlds be born.
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#2

[Casual's Tier] Compose Every Day Challenge (starting chord):

- Day 1 - Betrayal (Am) : 

- Day 2 - Little Wishes (F) : 

- Day 2 - Parting (Cm) : 

- Day 2 - Break Free (A#) : 

- Day 3 -  Longing (Em) : 

- Day 3 - Through Fire and Ice (A#m) : 

- Day 3 - Lost Child (C#m) : 

- Day 4 - Endure (F#m) : 

- Day 5 - Incident (E) : 

- Day 6 - Free (B) : 

- Day 7 - Thank You (G) : 

- Day 8 - Fearless (Dm) : 

- Day 8 - Change (G#m) : 
                                      rehash:

- Day 9 - No Regrets (D#m) : 

- Day 10 - Distrust (Fm) : 

- Day 11 - Pursue (A) : 

- Day 12 - Hope (D#) : 

- Day 13 - Return (C#) : 

- Day 14 - Flashback (F#) : 

- Day 15 - Venture (Gm) : 

- Day 16 - Game Over (Bm) : 

- Day 17 - Forward (G#) : 

- Day 17 - Unwind (D) : 

- Day 17 - Memory ( C ) : 
                  autoclave's version with added instruments: 

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#3

I'm starting to like your recent songs due to good use of Grand Piano with reverb. Somewhat similar to my style of composition.

Although at this point, I'd recommend if you used more octaves on the left hand melody to add more 'bass' and transitions to calm parts more smoother. I like your melodies a lot, keep it up! Smile
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#4

(07-04-2017, 08:46 AM)VoidZee Wrote:  I'm starting to like your recent songs due to good use of Grand Piano with reverb. Somewhat similar to my style of composition.

Although at this point, I'd recommend if you used more octaves on the left hand melody to add more 'bass' and transitions to calm parts more smoother. I like your melodies a lot, keep it up! Smile

Thanks for the reply(and advice)! Actually I only discovered reverb after I saw your compositions  Blush
I was wondering how you did the effect so I asked.

People on OS are so helpful  Smile

#StillSortOfaNewbie

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#5

(51st-100th)

51. Flip side

52. Realization

53. Past: [url=][/url]

54. [8-bit] Delusion: [url=][/url] (possibly the weirdest thing ever heard)
      Extension 1: [url=][/url]

55. [8-bit] Loathing: [url=][/url]

56. Fiery: [url=][/url] (dubstep like piece)
(a more realistic dubstep remix)

*start of reverbs in piano pieces*

57. Under the stars: [url=][/url] 

58. Towards you: [url=][/url]

59. Goodbye 

60. Wish you well (in progress):  (follow-ups will be posted later)
                                      (Ver. 2):  
                                      (Ver. 3):  
                                        (Ver. 4):     
                                 Completed:  

61. Destiny:    (MIDI Image)

62. Waiting:  

63. Broken:  

64. Dignity:  

65. Wish:  

66. The Silent Dance 
      major version: 

67. Dispute: 

68. Finally: 

69. Grief: 

70. Vow: 

71. Yesterday: 

72. Antipathy: 

73.  

74. Epiphyllum:  

75. Devise: 

76. Nostagia: 

77. False Awakening: 
True Awakening: 

78. Dance of the Abandoned: [url=][/url]

79. Denial: [url=][/url]

80. Valor: [url=][/url]

81. Tide: [url=][/url]

82. Oblivion :  [url=][/url] (refining an old piece before joining OS)

83. Remember: [url=][/url] (flute test w/ 8-bit Sine)

84. Surmount: [url=][/url]

85. Colors: [url=][/url]

86. Fate: [url=][/url]

87. Sunset: [url=][/url]

88. Moving On: [url=][/url]

89. Counter attack: [url=][/url]

90. Revenge: [url=][/url]

91. Adding as many half notes as I can:  (scrap)

92. For You: [url=][/url]

93. Turning Back: [url=][/url]

94. Starlight (in progress V): [url=][/url]

95. Jungle Fairytale: [url=][/url]

96. When you're in a hurry (beg for a cab):  (scrap)

97. Skies: [url=][/url]

98. Reminiscence:  [url=][/url]

99. Envy: [url=][/url]

100. Dramaphiliac: [url=][/url]

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#6

(101st - 150th)

101. Story of Mine : [url=][/url]

102. Snow: 

103. Everything: 

104. [10-min challenge] Corrupt : 

105. Before Dawn : 

106. Sentiment : 

107. Love you :  (refined old piece)

108. Rain :  (refined old piece)

109. Blind : 

110. Flare: 

111. Pioneer (19/9 YT stream) : 

112. Castle of the Moon (21/9 YT stream) : 

113. Pondering : 

114. Crimson : 

115. Courage : 

116. Statics:  (four-and-a-half-minute-long 8-bit song)

117. Suspense:  (short loop)

118. Regret: 

119. Scarlet: 

120. Loving you, falling for you:  (notes created by typing the title)

121. Truth:  (refined old piece)

122. The Returning of S*en: 

123. Moving On: 

124. Forget: 

125. Soar: 

126. for LP05:

127. War Cry: 

128. Empty (trying to compose deaf): 

129. Please love me: 

130. Jealousy: 

131. End of story (I'm the monster): 

132. Too Late: 

133. Wonderland : 

134. Tonight : 

135. Lullaby : 

136. Blessing : 

137. Persist :  (duration : 5 minutes)

138. Dearest [Crim's theme] : 

139. Another Day :  (3-min challenge follow-up)

140. Delight : 

141. Beyond the Tears Fallen : 

142. 

143. Torment: 

144. Rewind : 

145. Forgive : 

146. Cureless: 

147. Reaching Out : 

148. Repetition: 

149. Alone: 

150. Let Go: 

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#7

[More Than Just A Cup of Tea Tier] Compose Every Day Challenge (starting chord):

- Day 1 - Merry (F7) : 

- Day 2 - Blooming (D#7) : 

- Day 3 - Gliding (A#7) : 

- Day 4 - Hush. (C#7) : 

- Day 5 - Dawn (Am7) : 

- Day 6 - Fade (A#m7) : 

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#8

Okay Crimson, please don't look so low on yourself. you are currently my fav songwriter apart from Alan Walker and MinecraftUniverse (a.k.a TrueMU a.k.a Jaz). AND I JUST LOVE YOUR SONGZ SO MUCH
And by the way, I saw that one of your songs is called "Alone"... But there are so many popular songs called Alone that you maybe should try some more umm... original song names...
I mean like Alan Walker has an "Alone", Marshmello has an "Alone" so yea...
AND PLEASE UPLOAD ON YOUR YOUTUBE CHANNEL xD
(Sorry for "scolding" you I really am not the right person to do it)

Music is life; Life is music.
Music is love, and I love my life.
Thank you and good night.
(Bed: You can only sleep at night.
Me: Alright then I'll listen to some music.)
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#9

good. welcome to team cimson

Man who has no life
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#10

[151st-200th]

151. Isolation: [url=][/url]

152. Time (refined old piece) : [url=][/url]

153. Field of a lost dream : [url=][/url]

154. Undo : [url=][/url]

155. Skipping : [url=][/url]

156. Different Paths: [url=][/url]

157. Ringtone??? : [url=][/url]

158. The fallen Stars : [url=][/url]


159. Carousel : [url=][/url]

160. Leap : [url=][/url]

161. By your side : [url=][/url]
rehash: 

162. Breaking Point : [url=][/url]

163. Pages : 

164. Agony : [url=][/url]
remix [credit to alex32124] : 

165. Shatter : [url=][/url]

166. Carry On [192 notes challenge] : [url=][/url]
reprise: 

167. Blind Dance : [url=][/url]

168. Cruelty [final ver] : [url=][/url]

169. Purpose : [url=][/url]

170. Nothingness : [url=][/url]

171. Encounter : [url=][/url]

172. It's Great to Be Alive : [url=][/url]

173. Mourning : [url=][/url]

174. Perfect World : [url=][/url]

175. Saviour: [url=][/url]

176. Unforgivable: [url=][/url]

177. Even So... : [url=][/url]

178. Pluviophile : [url=][/url]

179. Edge : [url=][/url]

180. Vengeance : [url=][/url]

181. Story : [url=][/url]
The story ends here: 

182. Guilty : [url=][/url]

183. Plateau : [url=][/url]

184. Uncertainty : [url=][/url]

185. Get Over It : [url=][/url]

186. Inconsistent : [url=][/url]

187. Closed Doors : [url=][/url]

188. Haunting : [url=][/url]

189. Today, Tomorrow : [url=][/url]

190. Don't close your eyes : [url=][/url]

191. Why are you Crying? : [url=][/url]
        alt ver: [url=][/url]

192. [one octave challenge] Chant : [url=][/url]

193. Myotosis : [url=][/url]

194. It's late : [url=][/url]

195. Aurora : [url=][/url][url=][/url]

196. Look through me : [url=][/url]

197. Sole Wanderer : [url=][/url]

198. Tragedy (Lost is Lost): [url=][/url]
First draft (Lost is Lost) : [url=][/url]
First draft (Tragedy) : [url=][/url]

199. Cursed Fate : [url=][/url]

200. Just Like Yesterday : [url=][/url]

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