Suggestions on something I'm working on

[The_Happiest_Husky]

Working on this, but after a couple variations the piano doesn't seem to fit anymore. Anybody got suggestions of what I can do to replace the piano?

[PuzzlePuddles]

firstly, i'd suggest replacing the 808 kicks with 909 kicks also the bass is offtune from the melody

[The Institute]

to my ear, it sounds like the bass notes should be something like C, G#, F, G (instead of A, C, E, G#), but maybe you're going for something unusual. the piano also sounds just slightly late to me, but when i shifted it back a 16th note then it sounds slightly early, though i still liked it a bit better that way.

[Firebolt391d]

I agree with The Institute about your bass/guitar (muted guitar) notes. There may be some deviations in what he suggested that would work, but definitely I am hearing C as being the main/root note in the piano part at the beginning.

I'm not sure what kind of key you are trying to follow, but those electric guitar notes (starting in measure 13) also don't seem right to me - they seem a bit harmonically dissonant, for lack of any better terms.

Well, anyhow. Idk.
The percussion is good :]

[The_Happiest_Husky]

Thanks for the help guyss
I am specifically looking to change the piano though, not anything else
Though I will take what you've said about the muted e guitar into account as I don't know much about keys yet