this is a cry for help

[Lopyt]

Hurting your feelings isn't my intention when I provide honest feedback, I just value honest feedback a lot as its the best way to find out how to get better. Had I earlier known it was a cover I'd have told you that you could use smooth synth for the chords and synthesizer with distortion for the wind noise and riser, etc. but I didn't have that context earlier. I'd be happy to collaborate with you on this song and share my techniques if you'd like