Eric's Songs

[cork]

Almost 9 minutes long! That's awesome

[SongWriter12321]

I hear no key that this song, Locked Inside My Head, though it is good I find it needing more of a home key, it sounds rather vague and shifty, this is not for the sole purpose of crituque but for the purpose of refinement, I think you possess much of Debussy's style in this piece, which sounds Impressionistic in style and melody, I also find it interesting the beginning resembles the beginning of Rachmaninoff's Italian Polka.

[SebastianQ]

[url=]Land of Awakening ~Complete~[/url]

Sounds alright, a bit off beat at the beginning, and towards the end and in the middle, make sure you have a key, and make sure your using the right notes, or if you're intentionally using a modified scale like the harmonic m, melodic minor, hungarian, etc., make sure you're using the right chord over the modified notes. Music theory is your friend.

[CraftyVelociraptor]

or just say that the entire thing was offbeat, and that I'm horrible. That's another way to make me feel good!
Bye

If you can't take constructive criticism then making art is a bad idea. I like all of your music and lots of people do, you don't have to leave.

[Jonah]

or just say that the entire thing was offbeat, and that I'm horrible. That's another way to make me feel good!
Bye

If you can't take constructive criticism then making art is a bad idea. I like all of your music and lots of people do, you don't have to leave.

I agree. There's always bound to be criticism, no matter what you do. You can't go through life thinking that everyone is going to idolize you, and then quit whenever they don't. You have so much talent; it's a waste to quit here because of something someone did or didn't say.

[cork]

You're kidding, I've had much worse criticism than being told that something was off beat. And doing something as childish as saying that you'll potentially end your whole music making career off of a little criticism is just another way of saying that you can't handle that said criticism. Nobody's perfect, and if I've learned anything, taking criticism well is a great way of showing maturity. And this in no way is mature of you.

[CraftyVelociraptor]

It's WIP but here.

[CraftyVelociraptor]

[url=]Theme of Inspiration (WIP~collab)[/url] continue it if you wish, then after you finish a phase, i'll add on to it.
We can do this process until the song is done.

Cool!  I didn't have much time and I'll be gone for a few days. When I get back I'll check.

[CraftyVelociraptor]

Turns out I donn't have to go just yet. I'll do a bit more.

[CraftyVelociraptor]

Nevermind. I can't figure out anything good.