Feedback please

[Marysamats]

Hi, may I get some feedback on this: 

Thanks

[ExpectationUser]

Hi, may I get some feedback on this: 

Thanks

i can help yow with that
heres some advice
1. delete some drum notes
2. make the sequence volume a little quiet
3. remake some notes
 and there ya have it

[Whoops_lmao]

DELETE SOME DRUM NOTES??? BLASPHEMY!!! I AM ENRAGED BY THIS OS USER!! BAN THIS USER RIGHT NOW!!!!