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[Cool172]

post sequences here and i will give you my honest feedback and answer any questions you have
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[Asteroid_Goody42]

Rush E

[Cool172]

Rush E

dont make me listen to that

[Goody43]

Rush 666

dont make me listen to that

I won’t

[Benvisions]

Rush E is sus.

[Pricerocks]

I always felt like this could've been better but not quite sure what I wanted to do with it

[Bigmanawesome]

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[Cool172]

I always felt like this could've been better but not quite sure what I wanted to do with it

I like this one, i think it would work well with the newer strings samples that sustain.  Specifically, the violin toward the end of the sequence would sound a lot nicer sustained so that it could be legato (notes are smoothly connected to one another).  For the rest of the sequence, you could add a little bit of light percussion like a tamborine hit on the 2nd and 4th beat of each measure.  You could also put a little bongo fill at the transition between two sections.  I think a typical kick/snare pattern would be too much.  Measure 49-56 gets a bit too loud and starts to peak, making crackling noises.  It would also help if you pan the instruments more by separating similar instruments.  For example, you could keep E piano 50% to the left and place grand piano 50% to the right.  Same thing for violin and cello.  Some you should still keep in the center like jazz guitar

[Cool172]

post sequences here and i will give you my honest feedback and answer any questions you have
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the jazz guitar is playing too many low notes at once so it sounds a bit muddy, but i dont see any issues other than that.  add more!

[Goods On]

hello cool172, this is my bit so far, how can i get better production on it, similar to yours? I think the harpsichord sounds off slightly