Harsh Noise/Noise music etc

[Dahlia3lise]

Hai<3 i was just wondering if anyone possibly had any tips for me and how i can improve my music the first dingle i have out is the first thing ive ever tried to do tried to make it like Aphex Twin x Gnaw Their Tounges  But fr anything, any advice helps my sound cloud is - https://soundcloud.com/0h3lise more of a photography gal so album cover is sick but idk.