so i'm making a thing for a character i have

[Lopyt]

Ok what I think you should do is cut it off at 15 seconds. As an intro this is great, but it needs to be an intro to something.

I think it could go into something a little Dream-Theatery like https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vjoKyj51o_I or perhaps EDM or something, just make it have a full sound with moderate intensity and drums at 15 seconds in