Draft Lyrics for Loypt

[Marysamat]

--Verse One--

YOU HAVE LEFT ME DONE

WHAT WENT WRONG, I WILL NEVER KNOW

HOPELESS WHEN I TRY TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENED 

--Verse Two--

Approached by you, one day; a good day

Kindness was offered, with love and care

Taken with warmth, something special grew

A wall from you grew though

This wall seeps into my patience

--Chorus--

AH MY PATIENCE IS DONE FOR YOU

AM I BUT NOTHING TO YOU BUT AN OBJECT TO MANIPULATE?

BREAKING DOWN YOUR WALL HAS LEFT ME DONE

THE SCARS YOU CAST UPON ME, MY ENTERNAL BURDEN

GRANTED A MENTAL TOLL, ONE NOT ASKED FOR

HAS LEFT ME HURT, SWOLLEN FROM MY AGONY

NOW I RISE; SEE THE BEAST I GREW

--CHORUS 2--

DONT EXPECT MUCH FROM ME ANYMORE IM DONE WITH YOU TODAY AH

WHAT DO YOU THINK OF ME TODAY
AH AH SEE THE BLOOD AND PAIN YOU CAUSED
AH AH CRAWLING BACK AFTER I TRY TO MOVE ON?
WHAT THE HELL DO YOU THINK OF ME
(BACKGROUND VOICE: AH)

I AM DONE NOW

AH, TODAY I AM DONE WITH YOU

AH, DONT LOOK FOR MY GENEROSITY

AH, DONT APPROACH ME ANYMORE

AH, WE ARE DONE FOREVER

[Lopyt]

Not bad!

I like to revise my lyrics 2 to 3 times just to find stuff I may be able to rewrite in a better order of words or stuff like that. It really can help you get it just right!