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Are My Lyrics Blatant?

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Are My Lyrics Blatant?
Marysamat Offline
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08-17-2021, 01:27 PM
Are my lyrics too blatant? 




Dirty feet from countless miles.
Rollercoaster the path.
What was straight is now broken.
The choice to make is shattered.

Static without loss.
One look back.
Environment now shattered.
Symmetrical perfection.

Dam built; now collapsing.
Words to gather information on inevitable causes.
Broken mind calling for every line to be read.
Tearing through one path.

Drenched in sorrow, worry, and fear,
This cycle cannot continue.
The broken nights it will hold, keeping me up through sunrise to sunset, is one I can't go through again.
Yet, if all is meant to be a part of me fighting for this, let it rain down on me with all the pain it brings.


The greatest legacy on earth
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DarrelJohnson Offline
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09-11-2021, 10:39 PM
Nice lyrics


- my most popular sequence
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